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Crying by ~Drama-geek-07:iconDrama-geek-07:

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Crying

Late at night,
In the sorrow veiled darkness
I cry
Though no tears are shed
No sobs are said
The ink is my tears
The paper, my voice

I cry to the moon
Who knows my loneliness
I cry to the pillow
In my arms
Which has no lips to kiss
No skin to touch
No hand to hold
I cry to the shadows
Who own no earthly thoughts

When the tears have run dry
And the voice used up
I sigh
And sleep
And dream of crying moons
And dancing shadows
I awake to the pillow
Cradled in my arms.
©2004-2009 ~Drama-geek-07
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Submitted: May 28, 2004
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I wrote this late at night when I was really depressed and feeling lonely. For anyone who knows me it's very odd that I was depressed because I'm never depressed. After writing this I felt much better though. I got this picture off of google so It's not mine.
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~madzooey:iconmadzooey: Jun 17, 2004, 5:23:46 PM
That's very nice.
I love how you compared ink to tears and paper to voice.

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-JD Salinger (Franny and Zooey)
~Bobbie-Gurl:iconBobbie-Gurl: Jun 17, 2004, 9:11:24 PM
i like the added picture. i think it enhances the effect of the poem. still a great piece of work here :)

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~Drama-geek-07:iconDrama-geek-07: Jun 17, 2004, 9:33:17 PM
Thank you.

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"If we could both find a way to do the things that we say we might not sit in our rooms and drink our daydreams away"
~Drama-geek-07:iconDrama-geek-07: Jun 17, 2004, 9:34:40 PM
Thank you. I think it's kinda lame actually. Thanks again.

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"If we could both find a way to do the things that we say we might not sit in our rooms and drink our daydreams away"
~thezimchick:iconthezimchick: Aug 6, 2004, 11:41:10 PM
ooh, i really love this! i'm gonna have to add it to my favorites now :D

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//thezimchick

{the truth is out there}
{and so are sheep!}

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~The-Dreadful-Enigma:iconThe-Dreadful-Enigma: Sep 28, 2004, 6:50:36 AM
It's very nice. I like the way you describe it all.
~Drama-geek-07:iconDrama-geek-07: Sep 28, 2004, 7:06:08 PM
Thank you.

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"If we could both find a way to do the things that we say we might not sit in our rooms and drink our daydreams away"
~eagil:iconeagil: Dec 2, 2004, 1:00:49 PM
Loved it; verily expressive. It would be just as swell without the picture.

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~Drama-geek-07:iconDrama-geek-07: Dec 7, 2004, 9:36:44 PM
thanks.

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"If we could both find a way to do the things that we say we might not sit in our rooms and drink our daydreams away"
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